I have been trapped in my home for ages
When one day, I decided to go down for cycling
I looked up at the sky and I saw you
I don’t know how but my gaze had fixed upon you
You looked like cotton floating in air
You looked so surreal-
high up in the sky and just enough for my imagination to touch you and feel a bit of the cotton mush.
I saw you floating, you looked as soft as cushion
I could feel how heavenly your body looked, as I admired you, I saw how you blushed.
I felt I could reach you.
I stretched my hand, trying to grab you
Trying to feel a bit of the cotton-like-thing you are
But all my hands grabbed was empty air,
No matter how far I tried to stretch
I turned away disappointed
But your sight made me smile, yet again.
I kept gazing for as long as I could
I could see a bit of myself in you
I know that’s odd- but it’s also true
I could see formations engraved in you
And how they kept changing as I shifted my view.
I wrote this in response to the Thursday Poetry Competition. And I won! I nominate you all for the Penable Award. You can answer any 3 of the following questions-
1. What motivates you?
2. What food could you eat for the rest of your life?
3. If you could live anywhere, where would it be?
4. All time favorite desert?
5. What genre of books is your favorite?
6. What TV shows are really old, but you still enjoy watching?
©Rishika Jain. 2020. All rights reserved.
Beautiful.. 😇👌🏼👌🏼….
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Thank you very much!! And if you accept awards, you are nominated for the Penable Award.
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🙏🏼😊💕
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😍😍😍
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Thank you very much🤗😊
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And because you’re an amazing poet, I nominate you too!
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Thank you!😊
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Vivid
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Thank you very much😊
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And I nominate you too!
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You’re welcome
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Congratulations on your win. 👏 This is beautifully penned! 😍
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Thank you very much!! And I nominate you too🤗✨
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Thank you Rishika. Gladly accept your nomination. 💖
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Congratulations on your win, tiny!🤗🤗
Who doesn’t like cotton clouds? We all do!❤️😍
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Thank you so much, Miss-Tery!! Hehe..Yes! 😍
And I nominate you too for the Penable Award!
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You’re welcome!🤗
No awards plssss🤣🤣🤣 Grateful for the nomination.😊
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🤣🤣Okayy!
🤗💕
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Congrats Rishika! You definitely deserved it!
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Thank you very much Aanya! And I nominate you too🤗
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Aww! Thank you so much!😀😁🥰🤗
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🤗
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Congrats, buddy! This fluffy poem definitely deserved an award! 😍🎉🎉
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Thank you, Silver Stone!! And I nominate you too😁
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Anytime, Rishika; and thanks a bunch! 😀
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My pleasure! 😀
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Awesome dude … lots of love to you dear 💕💕
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Thank you very much Kripaa! Love to you too…And I nominate you for the Penable Award🤗💕
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Thanks fr the nomination.. have u made d post ??
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I have edited this post and the questions are given there.
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Mystic Inkslinger, I loved it 😍😍💙, so so beautifully penned
and Congratulations 💖💖 undoubtedly it has to won 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Miss Wordsmith, thank you so so much🤗🤗💖💖
And I nominate you too…You know how much I love your work😉🤗💛
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Pleasure is all mine 💙💙
You are so sweet, M.I 💞
Thank you so much, M. I 🤗
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🤗🤗💕💕
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Congratulations dear Rishika. Nicely penned 👌
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Thank you very much, Radhika! 😊💕
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🤩🤩🤩🤩
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Thank you😊😊
And I nominate you for the Penable Award!
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🥺
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“I could see a bit of myself in you
I know that’s odd- but it’s also true
I could see formations engraved in you
And how they kept changing as I shifted my view.”
I love these lines. ❤
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Thank you so much Joana! And these lines are my favorite too:)
I nominate you too for the Penable Award🤗💕
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Rishika!! Amazing as always! I could imagine the whole thing! Loved it! 😍❤️
And, congratulations on the win!! 🎉🎉👏👏👏
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Kamya didi, thank you soooo sooo much!🤗💖✨
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🤗🤗😊❤️❤️❤️
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Congratulations, Rishika!!! Amazingly penned!! And you totally deserved it!
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Thank you so much, Nathi!! And because you’re an amazing writer, I nominate you too🤗💛
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My pleasure! And that’s very sweet of you. Thank you, Rishika ✨💜
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Beautiful, thanks for sharing ❤️💖
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Thank you so much for reading, Lucy❤
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💖
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Ahh!! Beautiful!!
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Thank you!!
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The shades of pain & love in this beautiful piece of you….
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This poem is so soothing, loved it! 🙂 Would love if you check out my feed and share your feedback 🙂
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Thank you! Will do:)
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Congratulations. The poem was beautiful 🙂
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Thank you!! And if you are doing awards, I nominate you too😊
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Thank you.
But currently I am buried under a lot of school work. So I won’t be able to do it. Hope you don’t mind 🙂
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Not at all..It’s fine😊
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Oh such a beautiful imagery, Rishika. I loved it ❤️
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Thank you so much, Shweta❤
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This is so beautiful Rishika ! Well done 💖✨
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Thank you very much!💖
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Beautiful 🌼😍
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Thank you
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Beautifully written💜
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thank you!!
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Beautifully penned! 💙 You write so wonderfully, Rishika. 😊
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Thank you so much! 💙
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Well written. I really enjoyed reading it. thanks
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Such a beautiful poem, Rishika!
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Thank you, Cherie!
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You’re most welcome! ❤
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Wow congratulations! I love this poem! So beautiful 💕
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Thank you so much, Prerna! And consider yourself nominated for the Penable Award!
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Thank you Rishika! I am honored 😀
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😀
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Great poem! I hope I can write a poem like this!
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Thank you! Aw….you will!
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Gorgeous poem, thanks for posting it.
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Thank you for reading!
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Amazing
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Hello Rishika This poem is wonderfully written and created. I can see why you won the Competition. I loved this as the subject could be deep and cold and yet easy to understand Rishika !!
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Hello James! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Yes, I too was fascinated by that, glad you understood!!
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Hello Rishika I am glad you appreciated my understanding of your poem. Yes, I do enjoy your thoughts when you spread them out in such deep mannerisms. Have a wonderful week ahead Rishika !
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You too, James!
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Thank you Rishika !
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Simply beautiful 🖤😊
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